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15by *Zeal-GJP

Photography / Architecture / Exterior

Fuji Natura Classica
Fuji Film ISO 800

Critique by ~Know-The-Ropes Dec 11, 2012, 3:36:19 PM

I have found out for myself that architecture is a very difficult subject to capture, mainly because it never moves, you cannot move it, and it is very geometric (which can be hard to work with). You managed to get a great angle here; the walls come in, meeting at a point in which our eyes are drawn to (a point that is not placed in the center; people commonly do and should not, so props!). I love the backdrop colors, it almost looks like a stage. I am not a fan of the overwhelming lights in this photo, however, I think they can stand to be toned down a bit. They take away from the texture of the building and consume the photo. Not your best work but it is appealing to the eye (:

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~hoaxeye Mar 9, 2013 Hobbyist Photographer

Well done.

*Zeal-GJP Mar 10, 2013 Hobbyist Photographer

Thank you!

=pearwood Dec 11, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

An everyday location very well captured, so stark against the night sky.

*Zeal-GJP Dec 12, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Thanks! Always parked on the top floor, was always worth the view.

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